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3rd attempt at making/mixing song I'm going to solicit as Alex Jones bumper music.

Remake of song. My first draft was put up here about a month ago. I'm going to solicit it to Alex Jones's "Infowars" radio show. Hoping he'll pick it up as bumper music. Alex Jones does the talking parts. I do everything else.

I recorded this in hopes that the Alex Jones radio show will use it as bumper music. Of course, I'll have to polish up it's production quality...

There's a war on for your mind
Wake up fool don't be blind
This nightmare will shake you, it's shackles are tight
It won't let you go without a fight

There's a war on for your mind
Wake up fool don't be blind
This nightmare will rape you and strip you of sight
It won't let you go without a bite

(Alex Jones blurb)

There's a war on for your mind
Wake up fool don't be blind
This nightmare will take you and burn out your light
It won't let you go tonight

There's a war on for your mind
Don't be blind
Don't be blind

Wake up, wake up, wake up

This has to be pretty close to the finished product. I have a couple other ideas I might try. This was mixed on my 1990's boom box w/ 5" speakers, so I won't be surprised if there's mixing issues. I'll be getting some better monitors soon, and maybe I'll remix the song. Thanks for all your support (gives a yahoo out to Denis).

I took your suggestions to heart and cut out a bunch of stuff. I couldn't figure out what I wanted, so I started by eliminating everything except guitar and vocals. I then added back in the bass guitar and piano and some of the electric guitar. Does this version sound better. I still need to add in another or some more instruments I think (or maybe not?). I just don't know what the instruments are. Any suggestions?